Moley - your love of nastiness must be one of the worst kept Seki Secrets Ever

.... and you know that I'm a big fan of real/nasty Karate applications also

Now regarding your "feedback" and alternative scenario

Now ask yourself this
1. Why distract with a Ki-Aii ? You've just done a Haito Ask why ?
You might have missed or blocked.....
2. Who's gonna kick you after you just whallopped him with a haito in the Carotid Sinus ?
I didn't mention bing kicked - in fact I deliberately avoided that "cliched" application - also if your Haito to the Carotid had hit the target then I would suggest that the need for any of your further Bunkai would be somehwat redundant

and I'll put it down to a simple case of over enthusiasm on your part.....
3. Catch a Kick ???? ... ohhh ... Not me
See comment for 2 above.....
4. Punch the knee ??.. Don't think so....
Did I say punch ? I believe I said strike (posibly palm-heel)- the intent being to both damage the kneecap itself but also to allow hyperextension/breakage of the joint itself from the associated leverage from the combined scooping/striking actions......
Having said that - only as you asked mind you not in criticism of your alternative Bunkai - as well as the "nastiness" of real karate that's somewhat hidden in the KAta I also love the potentially endless variatey of applications that can be found. When teaching kata to kyu grades I frequently tell them that what'simportant when performing Kata is to "keep it real" - by which I mean that they need to visualize some for of application for each part of the kata - doesn't matter if it's textbook - doesn't have to be wjhat the teacjer says/shows - but it's got to make sense to THEM - that way they can perform it with purpose instead of just going through the motions.....
